Absolutes
Absolutes show a special "how" relationship between two sentences. The two sentences are combined in a way that subordinates one to the other. For example,
Mary was sitting at her desk. Her head was slightly lowered over a pile of chemistry notes.
Mary was sitting at her desk, her head slightly lowered over a pile of chemistry notes. In order to construct an absolute, follow these steps:
- Check to see if there is a "be" verb in the sentence you want to subordinate.
- If there is a "be" verb, eliminate it and combine the sentences with a comma.
- Julie accepted the award. Tears were streaming down her face.
- Julie accepted the award, tears streaming down her face.
- If the subjects are the same, delete the subject of the absolute as well. For example,
- Julie accepted the award. Julie was overcome with emotion.
- Julie accepted the award, overcome with emotion.
- OR Overcome with emotion, Julie accepted the award.
- If there is no ?be? verb, change the main verb of the subordinating sentence into its -ing form. Then eliminate similar subjects and combine sentences with a comma.
- Johnny ran after the bus. He waved his hands and whistled.
- Johnny ran after the bus, waving his hands and whistling .
- OR: Waving his hands and whistling, Johnny ran after the bus.
- If there is a "possessive" relationship between the two sentences, use possessive pronouns (its his, their, etc.) to indicate the relationship between the subjects.
Active: The cat confronted the burglar. It arched its back and bared its teeth. The cat confronted the burglar, arching its back and baring its teeth. Passive: The cat confronted the burglar. Its back was arched and teeth were bared. The cat confronted the burglar, its back arched and teeth bared.
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